Not much to comment on. It's a good start, but try to remember not to centre your text unless it's a poem. It puts some people (like me) off.

Aw wonderful. I miss you! :[ All your stories are great--I havent been of FP in awhile now..school is bogging me down : [ I should have a web comic up within the next two months tho :D

I hope you continue this. I'm looking foward to it :D

Hm. I'm intrigued.