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Reviews For: Sins in Heaven
Luny Loona 2007-06-26 . chapter 1
Not much to comment on. It's a good start, but try to remember not to centre your text unless it's a poem. It puts some people (like me) off.
daughter-of-louis 2006-10-26 . chapter 1
Aw wonderful. I miss you! :[ All your stories are great--I havent been of FP in awhile now..school is bogging me down : [ I should have a web comic up within the next two months tho :D

I hope you continue this. I'm looking foward to it :D
Creative Destruction 2006-08-31 . chapter 1
Hm. I'm intrigued.
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