Reviews for CAPTOR: Purgatory

TheMagicalMathPixie 2007-04-15 ch 1,	abuseAlright, review time. This chapter is slightly confusing, but I think I've got it.
kimono3kitty 2007-01-18 ch 14,	abuseIt was lovely! The action scene wasn't as bad as you said it was; it was pretty good. I'm glad Kanesuma's out of the hospital. Darsica is a snake, but I bet he's also one of those dark, broody,and bishie types. I will look forward to your next post, till then good luck with you projects.
kimono3kitty 2006-12-06 ch 11,	abuseHey! As promised, here is your review: The plot line is a little confusing right now, probably because so much has happened, but I do understand what's going on. Some of your action scenes, like the one with the humanoid, don't flow very well. Well they're okay, but when you compare them to the rest of the story, the writing styles don't match up...I hope that made sense! All and all, I really liked it! Much luff!
MyNameIsMad 2006-10-10 ch 1,	abuseOo, angsty! Nice so far, you've got a good thing going here. I was a bit confused about teh aliases, but I managed to work it out eventually, so it's not that big a deal. The whole fight at the end seemed just a tad rushed, and you may want to flesh it out a bit more. Just a tip. I'm surprised no one else had reviewed this yet! It's very good! -Mad