Great poem.

~Twilight Starr~

i love "and made me forget every class i took on self-preservation" cuz i know the feeling. i really love the way you write poetry. i sat and read every single one of the poems you've posted here today and reviewed my favorites. anyway, i just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed your work.-aly

Are all your poems like this? Short, but they get their point across. They don't go round and round in circles; you say what you mean, and only once.

I like this very much too. I like your writing style, it's simple and effective.