wow. i like this. its very good.~liz

i love it. your poems keep astounding me with their increased and increasing brilliance. maybe your email is broken :P. love you, my darling, i'll say i don't understand for now.

Ah, damn you pulling on MY heartstrings! "than of those that did,/and touch your lips./i’m beginning to believe this is as close as i’ll ever get." "steeling myself/and breathing, oh how i am in love with this/this ever quenching feeling of/no longer being lonely." Hawhe! *glomp*

love it heaps!! very well written.

keep writing!

Autumn

"“forget it” is a good policy."THat needs rereading a few times to get the full impact ;) Go alice, you really are good at (moral? call it that?) poetry