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| Hemlock 2007-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseChills, man. Chills. |
| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abusestill, very interesting |
| classic violet 2006-08-27 ch 1, | abuse"eyes to eye the blest. / lest the truth be known, / i ride home alone." adore it. this poem is short but just lovely. i like the title. |
| the naked civil servant 2006-08-17 ch 1, | abuseit feels so introspectively exclusive. like you're invading its privacy by reading it. but just... so complete. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI liked this a lot. especially the way you ended it. so short, but-- it got under my skin. |
| crazy dog events 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abusenot my favourite of your pieces, but the rhyming is solid. And as fo rthe title- it's not wrong to have something simple. |