o my goodness...i love thid...its adorable!

I cannot decide whether or not I like this piece of work. It’s the diction that I can’t decide about. Part of me wants to say that the simple, straightforward nature of your word choice is different and therefore a good thing. But the other part of me argues that it is too plain and that this poem just sounds like a lot of rambling. Regardless of the diction, I thought you did a good job of expressing yourself – adoration is easily detectable in this poem. Keep writing!