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| Shikokudarkstar 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseOh do continue! This is fun to read. Update soon ~Shik |
| maylay 2007-08-27 ch 3, | abusei love your story snow sound like an intresting character! im not sure about fashion to much but i do want to go into design, maybe i can draw you up something? that would be fun!! i think originality is best, so making snow wear white should suit him, lots of fur and scarfs, and dark colors depending for what your going for, i don't have a good grasp of your characters yet~ |
| xXHaunted CookieXx 2007-01-04 ch 3, | abuse*begging for more* i love it. please write more!! sorry, i have no idea about fashion stuff... or i would definately give you a hand ^^ keep writing, please, i can't wait to see how this turns out. ~~xHCx~~ |
| Shihu 2006-08-23 ch 3, | abuse^__^ ! Cute beginning ~ You need to finish it~ Thanks for the review of mine =D I just need to finish a paragraph on Chapter 1, and I'll put it up !~ -Shihu |
| Pineapple Chiffon Cake 2006-08-22 ch 3, | abuseOoh! It's getting interesting :D Angel's got this all figured out, doesn't he? Fear the girly man! lol. I like how this story is going. Update soon, please! |
| Sapphire Spectrum 2006-08-19 ch 3, | abuseOh, I like Angel. He's very cool. And I liked the idea of Snow as a model too! I'll look out for an update, so get going!! Ideas on fashion clothes? My ssiter's into that sorta stuff... I'd probably make it crap... but have cool clothes! I love cool clothes! YAY! |
| Noihseret 2006-08-18 ch 3, | abuseoh wow, this story is developing nicely ^^ I like the angel dude. I also like how Snow and Angel dislike each other. I'll bet anything they'll learn to love each other after a while. lol. litterally. *wink* it's like you know it'll happen, but you just don't know how. I like that. ^^ anyway... can't wait for chapter FOUR! BWAHAHAHAHA! |
| Ayame-Sohma's-Pet-Kitten 2006-08-18 ch 3, | abuseOncrt to be a chapter! ^_^ But other than that, I really like it. The only thin is, there was too much in the parentheses. It kind of takes away from the story. But only a little. But I still can't wait to read your next chapter! |
| Derek57 2006-08-18 ch 3, | abuseO, fashion advice? Make him wear tight jeans and a tight black shirt and have a red neckerchief and green and black converses and sexy pink socks...heh heh. Well, those are my ideas, I don't know whether you will use it or not, but it's worth it to promote originality... Good start; I hope you continue. Snow's lifestyle and personaliy is developing well. *salute* Derek x |
| Derek57 2006-08-18 ch 2, | abusePromising. |
| Cedric Kale 2006-08-13 ch 2, | abusethat was erm... very short yah that's it short very well seeya |
| Ayame-Sohma's-Pet-Kitten 2006-08-11 ch 2, | abuseThat chapter was WAY too short. It's not even a chapter! Just when it gets good, you stopped. Please get off your lazy ** and get going! I do like how you write. I like how you matched the weather to Snow's mood. So write more, onegai?~Ayame-chanPS: yaoi rules! >^-^ |
| Noihseret 2006-08-10 ch 2, | abusethat's such a cool name!! Snow ^^ great story so far. it seems very interesting. write on!! |
| Noihseret 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abusehm... sounds good. ^^ can't wait to read it!! |
| Sapphire Spectrum 2006-08-10 ch 2, | abuseGet off your lazy ** and get going!! We want more longer chapters! Woo! Thanks for reading my sinful story, I love getting reviews and so I'm all happy and bubbly and such about getting them. i won't be able to updated for a couple of weeks 'cause I'm going on holiday, but after then I hope you'll still be reading! So whne I got your review I was all happy and 'of course I'll read your manga!', and then in your profile you were like 'I only write yaoi' and I started partying 'cause I love yaoi! *drools* And I read your profile and you're fifteen and short! I'm fifteen and short too! GO US!! But yeah, sorry. Rambling a bit (a bit... LIES!). Thanks for reading my story and great job on this - I wanna know more about Snow. I think it's so cool how he's a guy and Snow White. But yeah... update soon! :P |