@alan

K inbred, first, its a bloody desert. Who's to say the communities would have an ATC, especially if they were small and thrid world, it's a small plane not t a 747. Ever see pheonix rising? Same deal. This is believable. Flying over the united states or europe you'd be right, but that is probably not the case here. As far as staying with bodies or whatever, why wouldn't she go look for help? If there were no emergency supplies in the plane there's really no use staying there, she'd be left for dead. Also, if you've read the darwin awards, even if there are emergency supplies, after the shock of a plane crash or car accident in the middle of no where, people have left them behind before to go search for help.It's happened before, and is therefore believable, even if it may not have been the best idea. Not everyone is a survival expert. And as for recuperating wiht a stranger, I'm sure staying in the desert injured and with no food or water is a much better idea,-read- she's already passed out and -not- in a position to refuse help. I see no flaw in this. K thanks for the arrogance.

Too many holes in it already. Do you not see them? I'll outline what I don't like here:

1. Whay do you mean 'the plane was in the way'? If you have a plane crash the ATCs will know about it for a start so you'll be rescued or scraped off the floor within a matter of hours. Plus, if you did survive, you'd not leave the crash site until you know the state of your family.

2. Assuming it went your way, why would this girl want to recuperate with a stranger from minor injuries whilst her parents bodies were still trapped in a wreckage in the middle of a baking desert, seems like a bit of a retarded thing to do to me.

I'd advisew you come up with a more solid plot before spending your time trying to construct such a tale.

Keep writing

Alan