WOW that was AMAZING...

And it made it even more capturing for me because at the time I was listening to a song that fit perfectly...(Everything by LIFEHOUSE)

AWESOME!!
XDD

If there were ever something to basically mirror my feelings about the guy I like...this would be it...great job :)

Great poem. Interesting how I'm doingthis at the very moment. Keep writing great stuff like this.

hauntingly beautiful."a lone tear falling from pure blue eyes

and running down a pale cheek."

perfect.

Wow, the emotion and thoughts expressed in this poem are well described and vivid. It's all nicely written, the words create so much colour and feel in it. Good job