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| Pieces of the sun 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abuseKurt Cobain was my hero no matter how much weird ** he did...well he isn't really comparable to the likes of Marilyn Manson or anyone but pish posh. Nicely written poem, it painted a vivid picture in my head. I liked how you mentioned his blue eyes because everytime I see a picture of him, I notice his eyes first. |
| Access Forbidden 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abusethis poem is incredible, i love the end of it. great job! |