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| concerto49 2007-08-12 ch 1,  | abuseYes, most of us are busy urban people and sometimes overlook what nature really is. We forget to stop and look up, only to restrict ourselves to what is in front of us. Hm. Interesting. Flowers are nice. Anyhow. Cool. Cheers. |
| Carmel March 2007-07-22 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I felt like I was right there. Wonderful job :) ~carm~ |
| An-Author-At-Heart 2006-07-30 ch 1, | abuseNice, a very good nature poem. The scenery was nicely described, I like the adding of specific flowers (and not just the typical roses or tulips and stuff), and the idea of other peole not recognizing the beauty added a bit more depth to the poem. Good job |