*grin* because you can't help who you love, right? *woot* this was good. I'll only seen half of Pride and Prejudice. When I get new movies, I tend to watch as many as I can at once, so some are missed... I have to go back to that one. XD

Isn't it great to be inspired to write when you watch or read something? I liked "he stands in front of her, begging eternal unity."

isnt keira knightly in that movie?

i heard it was cute. but i like to read books before i see them

I agree! :D This is great. I'm actually reading Pride & Prejudice right now (it's my assigned summer reading), so this just makes me that much happier.

The last stanza especially is amazing. Too stuborn indeed.

And Mr. Darcy is such a beautiful man!♥

Sweet poem about a sweet movie/book. Love it!

♥Christine

beautiful. the ambience you created with the first line was wonderful.

Oh my...this is incredibly gorgeous! The last stanza has a unique feel to it as well.

"forever they were star-crossed loversjust too stubborn to acknowledge it."

Almost gives hope for love being right under everyone's noses the entire time, or maybe that's just me.

oh i love this. and that movie. fantastic job, the imagery is wonderful. ~*

I think you did a very good job with this piece. You definitely captured the essence of Pride and Prejudice. (I liked the book; I fell asleep during the movie.) I really enjoyed the imagery in the first stanza. However, I’m not a big fan of stanza two. The word “unitedness” is awkward, and unless I’m very much mistaken, it’s not a real word, either. I think a word like “unity” or “unison” would flow better – and they’re both real! Overall, nice work. Keep writing!

I love the line "the sun splashes through the rain". It's just such a gorgeous image. Unfortunately, as most love poems are, it's a tad cliche, but it doesn't obstruct the poem at all. Actually, I think it might suit this poem. Anyway, good job. Keep writing!

marie