Sucks to be the dude you just made an idiot out of. =) Well written, indeed!

Q

Yeah, this deffinately isn't one of my better pieces. It was pretty spur of the moment and I didn't really care much about the outcome. Hah.

This is nice, but I wish the rhyming had been more consistent. Only two of the four stanzas rhyme, and they don’t even rhyme in the same pattern. It wouldn’t have been hard to tweak the poem to make it fall into a sense of regularity. With the rhyming just scattered throughout the poem, this piece feels half-hearted and half-finished.