really descriptive and powerful

Wow, this is really good. I have to say well done.

:O :O one of my verry favourites of your poems! I don't read stories because they take to long.

This is a beautiful poem, it is very emotional and true. You have a way with words. I'll have to read that book sometime! By the way, you mentioned in your profile about getting a poem published. That's really cool, can you tell me how you applied to get published? Thanks, and keep writing!

Hey way cool! This is a great poem and I love the way it ends "Where your life is changing without you there for the ride" I know how that feels and I also read that book, "Ther perks of being a wallflower" and it's a great book! Nice poem good job! Laters!

~Sammy

O i like the wings part. Tape doesnt work to well...unless it is duct tape...muahahahha. Nice poem!

powerful. especially those lines "Are super glued to your hero's back, but not even taped to yours."

I absolutely adore this poem. I know exactly what you mean, and every line in here is something a lot of people can relate to. Very well-written, and I love it.

excellent poem about the truth that has swoom at our feet of disgrace... very good! and i am sorry i didnt get to you until now... but thank you for reviewing daddywhy? and i am sorry that u had to go through what many people have gone through... including me...~kario

"Where your life is changing without you there for the ride"

That's a sad ending.

I really liked the ending - it leaves the reader in a very thoughtful mood. The short, choppy, sentence structure really fits the subject of the poem.

Well done.

Are super clued to your heroes backbut not even taped to yours

"clued" should be "glued".

I like this piece a lot. It's very descriptive.

One thing I want to say though: at the end of every poem, you write "Good-- Bad?". Don't ask anyone that. It's your choice whether it's good or bad, no one elses.

Katrina

It is an interesting poem, though sometimes your choice of words and line breaks marred the poem instead of helping it. Still, a nice poem which I enjoyed reading. Well done.

A very nice write. Noramally, I would suggest adding punctuation, but for this poem, the lack of it adds to the feeling and sentiment. I couple things you might want to change in this line: "Are super clued to your heroes back" a typo in the third word- you meant glued, not clued, I'm sure- and also, "heroes" should be "hero's", because you are talking a single thing not a group- YOUR super hero, not all the super heroes at once; and the apostrophe because you're showing possesion- your super hero's back. Thus it should read "Are super glued to your hero's back." Hope I didn't completely confuse you! This is a very nice write, thank you for sharing it. :)

~Sis

OH MY GOD I LOVE IT!! especially this part::

Are super clued to your heroes backbut not even taped to yours

love ya, girl.