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| WithoutException 2008-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not sure if you even want/read reviews of this anymore, since you wrote it two years ago and already have over 100 reviews, but... I loved it! Very cute. I love the name Reese. Though, I'm not sure why Cole was in the school. Surely he figured out that there was not, in fact, a PTA meeting, and since he didn't have to make copies, what was he doing there? Did Phil let him in, too? Ah, well, I suppose it doesn't really matter. My ridiculously logical brain has to over think everything. Keep Writing! WithoutException :) |
| orangejuiceaddiction 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseLove it! It's a bit cliche with the rivalry and etc, but I like fluff so I really enjoyed it! =D I would've liked more conversation in that final little bit for more juicy stuff, but that's just a personal preference. Keep writing! |
| EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abusewow...that was a cute cliche! i loved it nonetheless! |
| dOrKy-GuRl03 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusethat is a good one shot..i like it..its very good...nice job on it...bye..bye... |
| i-luv-smoothies 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story- where can I read more of your stuff? I love how you managed to take pretty much the biggest cliche out there and make it your own. Great story. |
| Genato 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuselove the fluff. love it. funny too. :) |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseOh this is gorgeous- you're right we do all need fluff in our lives. |
| thecoconutbubble 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha.. what a way to get your guy. Nailing him in the face with a staple gun. :). I love. |
| I Murder on Impulse 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG SO CUTE! XX |
| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant story, well written :) |
| kendralyn 2008-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it. |
| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abusecute cliche! |
| Pieces of the sun 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseToo bad this won't happen to ME in real life =/ |
| still we trust 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseamazing. I absolutely love the way you developed it - there was originality in there with the cliche - which just made it that much better. Thanks for taking the time to create this and share it! |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThat's cute. =) Let's hope they don't get sick in the rain. xD |