Nice poem.

~Twilight Starr~

Great. I love poems exploring the salty side (cause people always focus on the sweet). Maybe thats why I wrote Salt.

Your poems have such a style to them that is so wonderful. :)

i don't know if i was supposed to, but i laughed at the granola part.

it's good, though, either way.

i like your writing, so don't stop.

:)

Great metaphor. (please tell me I spelled that right.) The last line is wonderfully bitter.