hey there! I liked the 'prologue' so far. there were a few grammatical mistakes, but nothing serious. I think it's cute so far. Maybe she should like nice and polite guys but fall for a dangerous and hot one? Lol, that's just an idea! If you need any help, let me know! I'll try to think of a better title, but it really depends on how you plan to continue this. Good work though. I totally agree with Michael about Kristin Kreuk, lol. Oh and Johnny Depp is so not old! Okay, maybe a little, but he's still the best thing around!

It is a good start. Probably the protagonist should meet some cute and nice guy who breaks her heart and then some hot bad boy sweeps her off of her feet. And in the end, when Nadine askes, "Which do you prefer, 'cute and nice' or 'hot and bad' ?", she'll say something like "Definitely hot and bad." It's just a suggestion you don't have to use...

I like it. Love it. I love the title, too, actually. But you know what? I WOULD SO HAVE CHOSEN ORLANDO OVER JOHNNY ANYDAY!! I am so in love with him, it's not even funny. =]

Interesting beginning!

I love your title: Who Says Nice Guys Finish Last? ^_^

UPDATE SOON!

i know how it is. you have the idea in your head but just can't get it down the way you want it. that's how my stories are. i have to say though, i really like this so far. it seems really swet and carefree so far. i totally agree with leah. nice guys over the bad boys. always. lol. i hope you decide to write more of this soon. 'cause i really like it so far!

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