Amazing metaphor, it was awesome because it's really hard to make something so nice in a haiky. Awesome!

I like your use of color in this - grey rain and green meadows. How something so bland can make something else so beautiful. Just very nice work. Keep writing! :)

Oh, and this is nice, too, because it has a completely different feel to it than the first poem. I see someone stranded at sea during a massive storm. It's very beautiful, this picture you've created. Keep writing! :)

Use of an exclamation point in a haiku - that's pretty impressive. Though I was told that if I wanted to read really good haikus, I should read yours. And hey, does not disappoint. Such interesting language in this. I love the idea of weeds being "reborn," and instead of by rain, it's "heaven's cold tears." Very nice poem. Keep writing! :)

Very visual, and mystical. Quite thought provoking. Great haiku.

Nice haiku, very nicely written.

Nicely written, I like your wording.

very unexpected, thought-provoking

This really speaks to me. Very specific and yet openly haunting. A favorite. Marvelous haiku.

So powerful and enlightening.

beautiful. I'm favoriting this.

Cool.

Nicely written, I liked the fast paced feel to it.

I like this a lot. Going through a weed problem myself. ;)

BTW, thanks for reviewing my haiku. :D

Oh how my mom hates weeds. WOnderful poem.