“You don’t look twenty-one,” the bouncer said, looking Jerry up and down.

“Of course I’m twenty-one,” Jerry winked flirtatiously, flipping the hair over his shoulder.

“Works for me, sweet cheeks,” the bouncer grinned lecherously, grabbed Jerry’s **, and let them into the club.



HAHAHAHA, loved it.
I *heart* crossdressers, they amaze me. Or even those pretty feminine boys who look like girls and kinda act like girls but doesn't pretend they're girls, in a Bill Kaulitz way. I love both styles.

Fu*king moar, please.

OH YAY FANART! I REALLY like this story, actually I love all crossdresing stories, they're so much fun to read. Maybe I'll attempt one one day, who knows!!
Lee

hahaha i love how the bouncer slaps his butt...heheheh he OBVIOUSLY had him fooled...! XDD

I love it! It's so...gayish! Nice job. Please write more.

Ew, that bouncer was rank. What a perv.

Did he really look convincing? Wow! Go Jerry!

I thought it was funun! Yis! And so, I'm bored so I'l end this review, short as it is. But Rachael is col, yeah, love her.

^^ It's cool so far. I liked the description of him being attacked by maascara!

Yis, yep, yes. Eyeliner and mascara are lovelyful. Yes, they most certainly are.

Erm, I liked the character? I can' treally think of much else to say at this point...onto the next chapter...

I love it! (Can't really top that right now, cause I can't wait to read the next chapter)

Aw, no update? I really like this.

Haha. I don't know whether to be extrememly amused or disturbed. A little bit of both, I guess. ^^ Love it. Update!

SDKLJFDJK;. I love this to death. It just gives me this big warm fuzzy feeling. Jerry is adorable. I love guys in dresses. And making them all stereotypical is fun. I wish I was Rachel. Ah, this is so damn cute. :) It's been a while, but you uh, you should totally write more. :P It would be fabulous and like a party, and I could bring confetti and everything.

Funny that the stereotype works that way, because according to statistics (they're dirty liars, but what do I care?)seventy percent of cross-dressers are straight. Plus, a lot of them are navy marines, I'm sure of it. Or lumberjacks.

It's good. The story, that is.

It's also six o clock, my time, and I have nothing reviewer-ish to say.

I hope you write more! I like crossdressing...

I like this chapter a lot! I like the way you set it up, and Jerry's character.

This story is so cute!! I like it a lot so far.

heheh drag queens are so cute ^-^