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Marli Coulupe
2006-09-02
ch 7, anon.
abuseI really enjoied reading all these. I'm still not to sure of my choices, but I'm going to go with:

Origionality:Zyax

Mechanics:MachMev

Best:BlackCat
Dune
2006-08-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseOk, so here are my votes: mechanics: MachMevoriginality: Shape of a starbest: BlackCatSorry i took so long to vote!
BlackTigerG2
2006-08-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseMechanics= StardustOriginality=ZyaxBest=Raven Kay

Not sure if this is the right one, I'm lost on this thing. I'm such a newb. ^^ -BlackTigerG2
Lynn Alan
2006-08-30
ch 11, anon.
abuseThey were all great stories...

Mechanics-Eowyn GreyeOriginality-SonyaflameBest-Blackcat
Akemi-san
2006-08-28
ch 1,
abuseVoting late. I set SUCH a good example T_T

Originality: BlackCat...Mechanics: Eowyn Greye...Best: Stardust
SkyDragono
2006-08-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's a good set of stories again. It was hard to decide. XD

Originality: Black CatMechinics: Eowyn GreyeBest: Stardust
Anchorage
2006-08-27
ch 12,
abuseSee how much I love my TWC? I've been abroad the better part of this month and this is the first thing I do the moment I get my hands on a computer! xD

Sososo, here we go:

Mechanics: Eowyn GreyeOriginality: ShapeofaStarBest: Stardust

Marli Coulple(giraffie)
2006-08-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseI really liked this! It was origional...but strangly unique at the same time!
henred5
2006-08-26
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting stories.Here are my votes:

—Mechanics:- Stardust

—Originality—Zyax

—Best:— Eowyn Greye

~hnered5~
Stardust
2006-08-25
ch 5, anon.
abuseThis was so excellent I don't even know how to describe it. Kudos. I love the story, and I love the details. Details make a story. Excellent, excellent, excellent, a thousand times.
Stardust
2006-08-25
ch 4, anon.
abuseHmm. I can't decide if I liked this or not. I certainly could have used more detail, and more closure...but it can't be helped. The part with David at the beginning was kind of random. Hopefully there will be a second part so I can find out how it ends?
Stardust
2006-08-25
ch 2, anon.
abuseThat is so freaking horrible. And awesome. Horribly awesome. I am laughing my head off right now in computer class...trying to keep my teacher from noticing I'm not doing much of anything...That is so tragic, you are so sadistic, and that story deserves a standing ovation. Kudos to you for starting this challenge off on an awesome note.

I feel bad for Emily, but very happy for Mikhail and Andrew. :)
shape-of-a-star
2006-08-24
ch 12, anon.
abuseElaine seemed to switch personas... the contemplative (almost crafty?) way she was trying to get back into the room and the childlike "kicking and screaming"depressing......but a good story! ^_^
shape-of-a-star
2006-08-24
ch 11, anon.
abusemind-numbing dialogue... but I'm a guy, so I can say that.Dani sounds like an airhead... -_-;;the characters were very convincing though, I will admit.I'll read the first one, so it'll make more sense to me later.
shape-of-a-star
2006-08-24
ch 10, anon.
abusehm... kinda told, but didn't show for the first part. the end was a twist... and a cliffhanger...? will you continue this? I'd like to read more.
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