o, a :D
i've read a lot of some of my friends' emo poetry and some from other random ppl but it's usually just...sappy emo. this is actually nice to read. it's poetic as opposed to pathetic
mucho gusto ^^

(hope i don't sound too pompous...i tend to do that..don't mind me :P)

Aw, well written. Good job! Keep it up!

~Anna~ ^_^

I like it! I want to hear it though. Does it have a guitar part?

>_< I know how this feels...All too well. This poem really hit home for me, so more poetry of this caliber and I perdict you will gain a large and loyal readership.

i like the song, it's soo pretty

Oh, so sad and pretty

Yeah, I'm still kinda lazy...what can you expect? It's summer!So, as I said before, great poem. Moving and touching.So yeah, GET CHAPTER THREE UP SOON! I wanna read it!