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Jessica
2007-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery haunting...another great piece! I, especially, love the first verse...hopefully this didn't come from personal experience (if so, my sincerest condolences)!
Ailonwy
2006-08-17
ch 1,
abuseAs always, good work. A message expressed skillfully.

~Ailonwy
pneumothorax
2006-08-12
ch 1,
abuseStanzas five and six stand out.
out in the rain
2006-08-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was just gorgeous and angst-y and everything I've wanted to put into words. I loved it.
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