[You are..] beautiful.

Though understated to be nothing much, that poem was very well contained and artfully done. It's simple, and yet so full of meaning that even I - knowing nothing whatsoever about it - feel as if I've just gotten a glimpse of something profound.

Five stars, lassy. Bravo. *claps* ^^

Love it!

i think if it were a bit longer, that would make a really cool song. i like it.