Reviews for An Ironic Sort of Day

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D L Dzioba 2006-12-27 ch 1,	abuseWell this is certianly an interesting beginning. You misspelled 'next' in the beginning but that's just a nit-pick. I'll review the rest of the story later.
PeopleAreNotBroken 2006-10-22 ch 4,	abuseOn the first page, "Next" was spelled as "Nezt" but that's the only real mistake that I can find. Quite ironic, but the leprechaun kind of leaves you hanging. Are you going to write more? Very enjoyable to read, but as I said, it leaves you quite hanging!
Darkening Mist 2006-09-03 ch 4,	abuseThat is so weird and confusing it was awesome. :D
Draketeeth 2006-09-02 ch 4,	abuse"“I’m sorry, ma’am, but we don’t accept credit cards,” he replied, handing me back the useless piece of plastic." end of last chapter it said "We take cash, credit, and checks.", why can't she use the piece of plastic? hmm, now a leprechaun, this could get interesting. There's not alot of them in writing anymore.
Draketeeth 2006-09-02 ch 3,	abuse"This one spoke in neither a Chinese nor an American accent; he spoke in a French accent." Hahahaha!! Bonjour, I am zee French ninja. "1-800-if-you-have-a-ninja-we-will-exterminate-it" Awesome, another number you'd never dial right the first time. " The dragon had a Swedish accent, which threw off the deadlyishness of his appearance." What does a swedish accent sound like anyway? That was so funny. M&Ms to cure ninjas. I can't even see straight anymore I'm laughing so hard.
Draketeeth 2006-09-02 ch 2,	abuseThis was so much fun to write on! I laughed all the way though the first chapter, then had a blast with the second. Keeki, this was a great idea for a story.
q is for quirks 2006-08-13 ch 3,	abuse...laughs some more funny funny funny. my favorite line was "I have three ninjas in my room from the Ninja Lawn Gnome Sound-Proofing Service and they’re all fighting in my living room!" how often do you get to hear that? and of course there's a dragon and M&M's... nice.
q is for quirks 2006-08-13 ch 2,	abuseahaha! this makes me laugh. little ninja people are hilarious. the detail is perfect so you can see exactly what's happening and i can so see two little ninja's bouncing around the place fighting each other. too funny.
pyra250 2006-08-09 ch 2,	abuseHa, I loved this chapter as well. Very original with the feuding Ninja sound-proofing people. xD It was very entertaining. I loved the number...lol. So long and original and I'd hate to actually have to use it one day. :P
pyra250 2006-08-09 ch 1,	abuseHa, I always enjoyed reading this. xD The company name was quite funny, and of course there would have to be ninjas in it. ^_^ "But this story is rated G. Hopefully. So I won't get into much detail with that. Ahem." ~I love that...lol. Gets the reader thinking and insinuates certain things without saying them. xD Overall, it was very entertaining. Not generally what I'd write about, but I enjoyed adding to it. :)
Draketeeth 2006-08-08 ch 1,	abuse"I could hear his snoring coming from the nezt room over." nezt = next "So because of this issue, as soon as I get up and put a toaster struddel in the toaster for my breakfast,. . ." Get seems out of tense to me. 'got' would fit better. "I get up and put a toaster struddel in the toaster for my breakfast. . .By the time my struddel popped up from the microwave,. . ." Hahaha, the toaster turned into a microwave. After getting this chapter, I had to sit back and just laugh. The name of the company is so funny, and the way it's written just cracked me up. It's very funny, hoped the other chapters turned out that way.
whackacake 2006-08-07 ch 2,	abuseDrake~! I cracked up when I read your chapter. xD I think you captured my style fairly well, and I dunno if that's your genre or not, but I think you did a great job. And it was hilarious. xD
Starle Moonlight 2006-08-07 ch 2,	abuseThe tone changed slightly in the second chapter. Not that yours is bad, it's just different from the person who wrote the first chapter. I still like this chapter, though. I just wish that it was a little longer and didn't move quite so fast. I would have liked it if you had spent a little more time describing each thing that happened. But that's probably just me. Good job!
Laura Fedora 2006-08-07 ch 2, anon.	abuseTruly bizarre, but fun :) How you people thinks of these things is beyond me, but it is entertaining.
Angels' shadows 2006-08-04 ch 1,	abuseHah! I knew it was you keeki! I guessed right! -dances around- I really luffed adding to this story, I guess 'cause it isn't really my genre, so it was sorta a break. -Chibi o_^

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