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| skottie 2007-08-05 ch 1,  | abuseWow... Unbelievably beautiful... Reminds me so much of myself and my ex-girlfriend... Anyway, I LOVE THIS. |
| RaindropsOnBlackRoses 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseThis one is one of my favorites. |
| SpeedingCars8 2006-08-20 ch 1, | abuseAll of your poems are so great, I love this, once again. Actually my friend has a poem that this reminds me off (I'll Be Fine) by RaindropsOnBlackRoses in case you'd like to read it. Just about feeling like you have to be better than yourself but can't. Great Work. |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseI like how the anguish and the emotional distance comes across in this with the rush of what the speaker would do for the object of the narrative. Good write. |
| aurora llyria 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. I must say, that fourth stanza is pretty darn awesome. The bold words and the arrangement of the words give it this strange strong rhythm that makes it incredibly intense. |
| fallin4ualwayz 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abusethe words drip emotion... great writing! |
| galexies-away 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThis flowed wonderfully and held alot of emotion. Well done. |
| MonsterGirl 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abusevery intense and deep o.O i like it =) |
| poemkitten7 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseWow, very intense and intriguing. *takes in a deep breath* But very beautifully written. I love angsty poems. There's so much emotion in this. Keep writing! :) ~Sara |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseIf I didn't know you, I would totally be scared by you. Or concerned for you. :o But I DO know you. So instead... I don't know. It kind of makes a weird kind of sense. Hm. |
| Dr-Pepper-2008 2006-07-31 ch 1, | abuseWow Thats really sad. If someone doesnt like the sight of another person they shouldnt look at them. If your with that person maybe that person isnt right for you. No one should ever want this for them self. Keep Writing! |