Perfect chapter, very suspenseful. I can't believe Damian went to her parents house.

The only thing I can say is wow. This is an amazing piece, I love it.

write more, kim! i really like the use of descriptions (i know i've said it before) but it's filling out and creating more atmosphere.

oo, cheap publicity - i added more chapters for you on that story of mine.

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o, liking this so far - the descriptions are more vivid than before and it's looking to be a good rewrite.

i trust you will be updating this one until the end? pleaase?

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