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| shadowcat86 2006-09-15 ch 1,   | What does this mean: everyone is kind of way of my? Kind of short and unclear, but nice ending. |
| Insanity Lord 2006-08-13 ch 1, | This is funny! I enjoyed this a lot ^_^ |
| Alice 2006-08-01 ch 1, | I'll start with the -ve amd end with the +ve. One spelling thing, I think you meant to put me but only a minor - "So really, everyone is kind of way of my,".Also I found some of the 3rd & 4th paragraph slightly confuzing I had to read it again to make sense of it but that's probably just me.I really liked the character and thought story was short and interesting, The personality shining through the way it was set out and written. Hope you win! |
| bob 2006-08-01 ch 1, | lol |