i can relate to this... the only problem i have is with the use of the word 'thing' the poem would work so much better if another, more powerful word replaces 'thing' IMO. good work

keep writing =D

Hmm... you can't remember when you wrote this, nor under which circumstances...? Strange... What manga or book could you have possibly been reading? Or what movies have you seen? :) But, it is a beautifull poem! It really is! Captures the emotion of being in Love quite well!

'If it is, I think it the most cruel thing your mind can make you feel.'

True enough! :)

Hugies K