Wonderful personification. I love how for once a writer did not try to make everything rhyme, (which is very rare) the words flow smoothly, with their own rythym (i really don't think I spelled rythym right, I never really could absorb that word ;)) Anyway, I love how you made the moon and the sun lovers, and the stars tears. I once wrote a poem called "Tears of the Moon" it really reminded me of that.

This poem attracted me because of it's title. I always thought that the word 'Twilight' was one of the most beautiful words in the english language, for it not only is beautiful to one's sight but it's meaning is something mysteriously beautiful.

Thank you for adding such a beautiful poem to the site, and thank you for reviewing my poetry. :)

~Sita

Nice! But it didn't really strike me as a poem... More like a poetic form of prose... But then again, I'm not going to be the one to teach you anything about the border between prose and poetry since I tend to get them mixed up quite a lot myself. Even so, I'm not sure about the rhyming in the beginning. Other than that, it's great :).

Lily

Wow... What to say... It is beautifull! Really! I love Twilight... Yet I love Night a bit more. And of course I also love Day... Seems I just can't choose...:) Any way, it really was a wonderful poem!

Hugies K

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