omg! this is one of the most beautiful poems i've ever read! i'm adding it to my fave stories list! it's really really pretty! and unique! where did you come up with the idea of the petals falling around the knife? it's beautiful!

"How much strength do you think it’d take/To pick up the moon and move it?" I absolutely love this opening line. The entire poem was well written and just... wow. I loved it. Keep it up!