No way, definitely not your worst! i thought it was good. Haha MR. SAFETY! lol just joking, although it strikes me as funny that "Mr. Safety" drives in the middle of the road on the way to snowshoe. LOL "But it's Christmas!" write on my fine comrade write on.
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Great message. I completely agree with you that people don't take driving seriously enough. My one suggestion is to make it more personal. Install a protagonist to show, rather than tell your message to your reader. That's just my idea.

Otherwise, good work.