Battle Star Galactica, without the space ships. Or, the Exodus out of the Bible. The twist is, the Joan of Ark of the Elves is leading the way.
It's good and it has a lot of potential. Go ahead and write the rest of it.

I like the atmospere it gives. Did I spell that right? at-mo-spere . . . Well anyway, this is my favorite out of all the stroies you've written on FictionPress. Which means . . . YOU HAVE TO CONTIUE! I don't care about the stupid reviews! Finnish it! FINNISH IT! FINISH IT! I'm just gonna keep sending you emails to finnish it if you don't.

Wow! that was amazing!please please please spoil us and write more!hugs!it's a little confusing, but first chapters generally are.I like Neitkuntoonie or whatever her name is. . . . Nietokune. close enough!

Well, I read it=^^= I actually like this story very much! I saw some spelling mistakes and grammer but other then that I look forward to reading your novels-.- or reading other chapters if you put them up. Very good tho!