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| melomaniac. 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseaw thats cute. i love popcorn. |
| TeaWithOnions 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abusecute poem! yay popcorn! |
| truthordeal 2007-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI've got to say, your title and summary are what attracted me. I'm not much of a poet, so I wouldn't feel right about passing judgment...so I'm not going to. The subject matter is light hearted, which is a welcome change to all the emo and goth poems on FP. |
| Lyn Kinsei 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseNice poem, I think. I like your first and second line, and I agree with the last one. Good job! |
| Neaera 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseSweetness! I wish I could enjoy popcorn... but I end up choking. lol Anyways, Nice scheming, it flowed very nicely. Keep it up!! |
| Your New Aesthetic 2006-08-01 ch 1, | abuseI love popcorn (: |