I guess I should have known by now you were a good poet. It really was neat how the emotions seemed to swirl up and down, finally spiraling down. I liked it a lot. Too many sob stories at CS?

A most excellent poem. Perhaps an overused subject, but as long as there are good poems such as yours, it will remain a good subject to write about. I like how you portray the hope, and only seem to crush it in the last two lines. Beautiful, keep up the good work.

~Nyght

Interesting! it has a very deep meaning and its sad. CHEER UP!