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| Hidden Lies 2006-09-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah I just re-read this poem and had to re-review it also. Umm, it is just that I was thinking about you know that, uhh, "phase" that we went through and it finished when you decided it was risking too much, this doesn't have anything ot do with that now does it? It's just, yeah it sparked my curiousity. You can email me with the answer if you want, although writing ot my school email would be wiser, then you can remove this reveiw and I can write another one if needed (please??) Luv Lizz |
| Panicking With Hesitation 2006-09-02 ch 1,  | abuseive been in this situation. its suxs. all the feelings just build up... idk.i like it.keep writing. |
| simpleplan13 2006-08-30 ch 1, | abusenicely done... i can realte to the situation very sweet.. especially the ending |
| alice is dying 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThank you for what you said when you reviewed sick little suicide! It meant a lot to me. |
| Leaving Here 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abusewow! i love this!its great.keep writing.~Liz |
| xDistortedReALiTyx 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseAmazing...I love how your feelings are clear, but it's all left up to interpretation at the same time...I really loved:I may be confused and really messed up,But I want to believe my heart won’t lie.My feeling is that I’ll never be with yI just don’t want to know it yet.'Keep it up!--pammy-- |
| fragileHeart101 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuse*standing ovation* i truly love your work. i really really do love ALL of it. sometimes they are a bit hard to understand, but yeah i love them none the less. :)luvers u xx |
| Princess-anna57 2006-08-18 ch 1, | abuseJOSH! :D Aww, such a lovely poem. Well written! Excellent. What else to say? ^_^ Write on mate! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2006-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is an amazing poem the 'This strange feeling that wells when we talk,The feeling that there’s more to you than what I see' really got to me. |
| The Unforgettable Sound 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHi, JOSH. Yes, apparently I like to use peoples names against them...think nothing of it. So why am I always so blown away by your poetry? I don't know...But I love it. love?...love. ^.^ |
| Sythiro 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseWow this is great! I am reviewing you cuz you asked me to when you reviewed my poem "Bells Ring" under TWHEART! Please review my work under Sythiro! |
| Jess 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abusegod another 1 that that has left me with nuthn 2 say... STOP DOING THAT!!... lol nah its a a really good thing! i luv it =) XoXoXoX Jessie-K8 |
| Nine-Black-Roses 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abusethis has left me speechless. well doneand if ur goin thru this now just to let u knw ur not alone on this, im goin thru this too . im very impressed u have put it into words u have writeen so well and perfectly describing sumthin i find undescribable.so well done x |
| Melanie Layugan 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWow Josh. I can totally relate to this. The flow is perfect and the words are straightforward. Keep up the work! Melanie |
| Hidden Lies 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Love and can relate to it balh blah blah... yeah, It doesn't make for a good reveiwer when you just wake up. Anyways awesome workings. |