wow! really well written

How true.

I actually want to read more...lol...Seems so incomplete, thats a good quality in a poem. Leaving people to think...

Keep Rocking!

Love, Tim

I like the symbology and it makes you think- i suppose it's like that old saying, one mans garbage is another mans treasure anyway its good spider

Well written, descriptive. It didn't strike me to be as powerful as one of your other poems, Flowers on a Rainy Morning, but it was still pretty good.

Nice job, keep writing.

Elenive

It's been a long time since I've read a poem with this message. A complex concept well explained and decorated. Keep up the good work.