Reviews for Beteen me and back

randompoetry 2006-08-02 ch 1,	abuseHmm, interesting. I like how you keep the form of the haiku but you stick other words in parenthesis.
girl without wings 2006-08-02 ch 1,	abuseThis is an interesting and enjoyable piece. Why not put it in the haiku section, since that’s what you call it in your summary?