wow..pretty good keep up the good work.. this entry is so long that I forgot that it was journal entry..haha..-_-;;

hey, wow this chapter is long! it seems like a typical day during the holidays except for mike's intervetion. does he like her? however i was thinking that the date was cancelled too abruptly. yknw they got defensive, and left! would mike be feeling guilty about this? i know i wouldnt like it if my friend left me alone.. more development on her sister please! what made her so, friendly all of a sudden?

this preetty good...reminds me of my self and my former diary..sniff...but she got burned...on accident I swear!..anwyas..keep up the good work.

interesting way of interpreting a diary as a living entity. (: this seems to be quite a promising start. continue writing, and let's see where it goes! though i sure hope it'd be longer the next time round! (: