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| Nemonus 2007-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseWow! I like this one. Very succinct, very well worded. I see it as being about writing, about the worlds half-reached, but that's me and I don't think it's you. I'd like to see a period at the end. Otherwise, very nice. Why is it "rated for abstract concepts" or somesuch? That's kinda funny. |
| WhinyPoetryFromGenerationY 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI didn't really understand it - but I liked it anyway. Just beyond my fingertips The knowledge of the Reality of an unreal world - that appilies to almost everything. Anyway, loved it. Kate )0( |