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| Inflaming Kaliope 2007-12-06 ch 1,  | abuse"Where are you now That the light can’t reach? Where are you now That the world cannot touch you? If there is even blind justice at all Are you perhaps finally at peace?" Wow. Those final lines really probe deep. Nice job :D |
| Princess-anna57 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI like this lots. Well expressed. Keep it up! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| NeverComeDown 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abuseI liked this poem.You captured the mood of being empty very well - it comes off pefectly. The ending of the poem is really good, as well. I like the reuse of "where are you now" - makes the feeling stand out more. good job :) |
| Aramar the Black 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very nice. A compelling candence.Words fall off the tip of my tongue, in trying to convey my thoughts. |