YEAH! GO OLYMPIA! ^_^ And you DID get out! This was a nice expression of your feelings! And don't worry, I have terrible handwriting too! lol

been a while...

i like this poem. It's always nice to know that you can still have hope.

I like your poetry, it's different than what I am used to. The last and first lines were my favorite part.

Vivid, and real. I love the format, it's so quick like.

I can only assume this person has AIDS, or some type of disease. Or maybe that's metaphorically speaking. Hm, this poem leaves me confound. But over all, very well done.

this is very good! :)~Liz

I love how its written!