The whole collection is strong, but it doesnt quite match the intensity of the first one. I loved a lot of them though, especially toni. That was another good one. They were all wonderful, dont be mistaken when I say the first one was really good they were all perfect, just the first one struck me the most.

Wow. This was so beautiful and depressing and...just I love it.

I like this... the light and room thing is great

not your best in this collection.. i liked the first 2 lines but the last one wasnt that great

I like the sunshine after the rain concept... beautifully done.. I love the format

sad and beautiful... really love the beginning stanza

powerful and beautifully written

hmm, this reminds me of when i'm ill and lying down on the couch and my carer (often my mum) leaves the room, turning the light off. and it brings back the sort of spooky emotions. wonderful work,

mez

sad but sort of beautiful in its own way. all sorta makes me think 'heart break'. lol. great job,

Mez

wow. this is wonderful. i really like the way u wrote this just using that expression. its sad and bittersweet. beautiful,

mez

this is the best so far. i really love the heart-deep emotions. its sad and really makes u empathise. brilliant job:D

mez

ineteresting to say the least. i liked the ending but the overall work does make u think. great job,

Mez

this is sad. i've never really encountered anorexia but its touching to be able to empathise with the girl. its like she's deceiving herself, almost attempting to convince herself that she can be pretty this way. quite sad. :( ah well, unique perspective,mez

woah. to be honest, i was pretty throwed by the last bit on heaven. found it a lil confusing but i liked the imagery and overall feel of it. seems almost magical :D

mez