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Guardian Midnight Raven 2009-03-05 . chapter 1
could u please get started on FEA: nightmare academy...
I loved fire eye...and i wanna know what happens to damarcus...
I beg u plz
ARIEoftheFOREST 2008-07-11 . chapter 1
... i miss the sequel, i remember r&ring what u had up at the time, and then it dissapeared... please try and get it up again, i liked FEA and i liked nightmare academy until it got taken down due to your writers block, think of this as a freindly fan request to re-post!
Heart of String 2007-08-21 . chapter 1
He...Oh, I gots IDEAS...(Big sharped toothed grin)
Toby: Obiouvly, she'll use US as testing dummies.
Hiate: Well, Im fine, and you will be fine...But what about Issume?
Issume( running away from me in a towel)WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO THAT CRAZY GIRLS HEAD!?
Me:C'mere! I wanna play trauma center! YOU HAVE THE GUILT FROM AFRICA!WITH SPIKIES INSIDE YOUR STOMACH!
Issume: (still running) SHE'S BLOODY MAD!
Hiate&Toby:...(thinking)
Hiate: I didnt know he was british.(Toby falls over,twitching)

-String

PS:Can Issume be my teacher or something in the prince story? He could be a music instructor and a teacher...Oh, and a enchanted hawk.Sourceres pet! I can be friends with mr. Royal sorcerer(who has to be clumsy and be Toby's brown haired clone in everything but personality, which would be sunny and cheerful.Oh, and Toby has darker sky blue eyes while he has lighter)
friend 49 2007-05-01 . chapter 1
Hi. I don't know you. :) Okay so I haven't left any reviews on the actual /story/, but I'll make sure to.

I like the sharpie one and the cell one most. Kay here's your fun fact of the day:

Worms have lips.

And planaria have the ability to regenerate like if part of them is cut off. HAHA
ISNT THAT EXCITING?

And where did you come up with the name Khimayri?
RandoMaia 2006-08-06 . chapter 1
Ehehe... me likey. Kara melting cameras, perhaps? Or pillows falling out of pregnant 'Toru's shirt? Gravity reverses and the director gets stuck on the ceiling? Just food for thought here... cheers, gj.
Vivus Tabula. 2006-08-04 . chapter 1
HURRAH!... Question, um why exacly was the camera man filming us in our boxers?Its funny but you must put up the part about the grad and the mouth of sauron showing up...also outtakes in which i am proposing to aviar and all goes rong lol anyays have a great summer
Dinuriel 2006-08-02 . chapter 1
Very funny, but one tiny little criticism... E-MAILS ARE PREFERRED?! WHY?! I mean, it's nice to get e-mail, but no one can see your inbox and all the lovely compliments you get, I think every chapter on every story should have a review toll! Or maybe I'm just fated to be miserable... I'm gonna go cry now... god, how am I not emo? Okay, I'm done now. See ya soon.
Casey Drake 2006-08-02 . chapter 1
*snerk* *cracking up*

:) CD
TADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD 2006-08-02 . chapter 1
AH YOU WONDERFUL PERSON.

Everytime I get a story/chapter alert I keep on hoping that it's you.

"“…so then you two walk over and say your line.” The director seemed extremely annoyed. Satoru groaned and nodded, and the two took their positions.

“If they had been recording this when it actually happened, it would be so much easier,” Aviar muttered to Satoru. The boy laughed and the two began walking again.

“Action!”

Satoru promptly tripped and fell flat on his face. The director sat down in a corner and began to cry."

=DI like this already.

"Satoru grinned maniacally. “FOR THE WALRUSES WITH TOOTHACHES EVERYWHERE!”

Kara fell over. “What the hell?!”

Satoru continued chasing Aviar around the set with his staff."

AHAHHAHAHAHA.You are amazing.

"“I’m a vampire!” Misha grinned. Kara nodded.

“That’s great.”

“Can I bite you?”

“No.”

“…”

“…”

“Can I bite you now?”

“No.”

“…”

“…”

“Now?”

Kara smacked Misha upside the head.

“OUCH! …now?”"

Misha=Tad

"Nicholai couldn’t stop sneezing. As we all know, this is a problem. Misha and Khimayri were standing there laughing and stating every animal the boy turned into.

“Walrus.”

“Tiger.”

“Monkey.”

“Bat-eared weasel.”

“Platypus.”

“Ostrich.”

“Lobster.”

“Goldfish.”

“Clam.”

“Newt.”

“Dragonfly.”

“’Skeeter.” (A/N: Mosquito ’Skeeter.)

“…nothing?”

“Oh, dear…where are you?” asked Letitia.

Nobody move. I’m a paramecium.

For the next three minutes, everyone waited for Nicholai to sneeze again. It was quite painful as well, because Aviar was standing on Sakaki’s foot. And then…

AGH! IT HURTS! KARA! MAKE IT STOP!

“What’s happening?” Kara asked.

I just—

The smallest sneeze in the world occurred, and Nicholai appeared beside Kara. However…

“Nikki? Where’s your left side?”

“I was a stinking CELL,” he growled. “And you know how cells reproduce, don’t you?”

Everyone shuddered. Nicholai sneezed again, and an exact clone appeared. The two sneezed one final time, and melded back together. Kara laughed and hugged the boy.

“Poor Nikki.”"

Awh.

"“Why do I feel really high all of a sudden?”"

That's hilariously perfect.

"The camera person immediately decided to post this on the internet."

heh.Well, I would have prefered FEA:NA, but, hey, you're the author.

Thanks Flaming.
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