Hmm, interesting. I wonder who that could be? :o (the sci-fi person)

This story is going to be an odd one...

Hmm, that was interesting xD Some things were kind of worded awkwardly and/or could have just been worded better to make the dialogue more interesting... But other than that, I liked it =)

Yay stories with guild members in them! ^_^

Sixteen different writers living in a house together... to what end?

The main problem with this story; confusion. Why are these people living together? How/why did the man get murdered? (It being a mystery, that's not so bad, it just seems completely improbable the way it happened- a flash and then he's dead.)

First the unknown narrator makes it seem there's a reason, then he takes that reason away. Trying to get a hold on the premise of this story is a bit like punching fog.

Aside from that, I do like the writing style. It's fairly generic, but in a good way and not a bad way. Things are well described, and you attain a picture of them in your head. It is interesting to read, and, whatever is happening, I find myself wanting to know what happens next. So it's basically well-written. Just clear up what is actually going on, and you'll have an excellent story.

Something weird just happened- I suddenly had the urge to add my own chapter after reading this one. Hopefully I can very soon. I hope I still can.Amazing, Tev. I loved this.

Thankies, Carpe. Yeah I luffed that phrase with the screaming too. So you're Sid? I was wondering who Sid was...

Thankies, Tevvy. Hm...maybe the ghost will go through his belongings!

-Chibi o_^

Haha...this was beautiful. xD I love your journal, Chibi...hehe.

I like this phrase in particular: I screamed, the third scream screamed in that room so far.

I'm not sure why, it just seems very comical to me. xD Reminds me of something that you'd see in the movie Clue (which I loved, by the way).

Anyway, this chapter was great. You kept the mysteriousness of everything. I think Nathan's death was a little sudden for me with the white light hitting him and finding out he was dead. Just my opinion.

I was happy to read this part, though:“So it has already begun,” Sid said in an ominous tone.

I have a continuing part. :) AND I get to be the ominous speaker-person-dude. :D -feels special-

I really liked this. :) I was thinking of something like survivor at first, but this seemed more lively. xD I was, of course, inspired to wonder why I was wearing a suit and why my hair was brown, but that's besides the point. :P Apparently, I decided to dress up and dye my hair. ;) Anyway, it was very intriguing and well-written, as always. Great job, Tevvy!

I liked this Chibi, although now I wonder who will go poking through his room and belongings.

This sounds very interesting, Tevvy ^^. Very mysterious too, like a mystery. Me liky!

Good job Tevvy. I love the way you made it kind of like a game of Clue. When you told me about it, I thought you meant you were going to make us all know each other like we do in real life, but this is very mysterious. I like it. ^_^ You know you're my favorite writer in the whole world (Publishing? Pshaw, who needs that?), so I don't really need to keep telling you how great I think you are, eh? I'm sure you'd like it, though. xD

Anyway, I can't wait to add my own chapter. Keep up the good work. ^_^