This is lovely, creat use of repitition. I also love the itallics - I'm a fan of doing things like that in poetry, when appropriate. well done :)

It's the paradox that puzzles me

The sheer vulgarity of grace

Its simple perfection

Weightless..

As the haze inside my head

beautiful

beautiful

beautiful

i like the lines "I love you, though you taunt me/I love you because you taunt me"

Once again this is amazing. I cant believe that this is many poems fused into one, you put them together so perfectly.

I love this.

"It's the paradox that puzzles me/The sheer vulgarity of grace/Its simple perfection"

"I know there's no magic here../Just spoken word,/a dull, monotonous sound that leaves me pining/For the enigmatic dreams of childhood/Where clouds were fairy kingdoms/Secrets and subplots,/Between the lines"

This is amazing.

Cassandra

Hm... good. I like it!

Very Angsty

I liked this poem, it gives me a strange, but good feeling at the same time.. weird huh? ha. i know, i'm pretty weird myself. great job! keep writing!