|Reviews for Subplots|
| Aomera 10/19/08 . chapter 1
This is lovely, creat use of repitition. I also love the itallics - I'm a fan of doing things like that in poetry, when appropriate. well done :)
| Lady Fingers 2/3/08 . chapter 1
It's the paradox that puzzles me
The sheer vulgarity of grace
Its simple perfection
As the haze inside my head
| Victor Joseph 11/6/06 . chapter 1
i like the lines "I love you, though you taunt me/I love you because you taunt me"
| notthecreepyfatguy 10/8/06 . chapter 1
Once again this is amazing. I cant believe that this is many poems fused into one, you put them together so perfectly.
| NothingMoreNothingLess 10/8/06 . chapter 1
I love this.
"It's the paradox that puzzles me/The sheer vulgarity of grace/Its simple perfection"
"I know there's no magic here../Just spoken word,/a dull, monotonous sound that leaves me pining/For the enigmatic dreams of childhood/Where clouds were fairy kingdoms/Secrets and subplots,/Between the lines"
This is amazing.
| shadowcat86 9/20/06 . chapter 1
Hm... good. I like it!
| blue.eyes.can.be.deceiving 9/18/06 . chapter 1
I liked this poem, it gives me a strange, but good feeling at the same time.. weird huh? ha. i know, i'm pretty weird myself. great job! keep writing!