great story...although I was rooting for the vampire...lol

GREAT! is about all i can say, it was well written with a good sence of detail. Keep it up!

This was awesome and it had a slightly different twist than I expected it to. It was different in two ways.

For one thing, I was expecting that she would turn out to be a vampire too, and then she'd be laughing her can off at having tricked him that she was a human. Then he'd be humilated and that could have been fun.

The other thing I was expecting was for you to take the speech about heaven and hell, God and Satan a little further. Since you decided to make the girl a vampire hunter - I thought she might turn out to be more than that - something more like a devine protector sent from God - like an angel - just to prove how deceived the vampire was.

All the same - excellent. It was really put together. You get noticeably better each time.

Hehe...Irony is lovely. That was a very nice little story. I'm glad you took the time to write it out