continuous, i like it.

different to the eyes but it all seems like one big exhale.

I wish I could just sit and soak in this imagery for hours. Great job.

It's sweet- I liked the concept of it all being dialogue, and the last line bolded. you really are a good romance writer. you're making me think I lived this! (oh I wish I had.) will change my profile for your new name. soon. I have to sleep.

Quite lovely - romantic. :)