Yowza! Talk about in the nick of time, quite literally! :O

Ouch! It's all gone pear-shaped :O

Nice touch - a story always is really good when something goes wrong and needs to be fixed. :)

What's interesting is that although Suarez failed to stop Oswald killing Kennedy, nevertheless some temporal interference allowed Kennedy to survive. I look forward to seeing how this plays out. :)

A bit confusing, but lemme see if I got the details right :)

- A rogue time traveller, killing people such as Caligula, Columbus and others whose actions harmed people
- A time travel agency which makes "approved" changes to timelines but which also tries to stop rogue agents because of the Shift Lock's limitations
- Same time travel agency also makes "approved" Freejack-like extractions of people noted for exceptional conduct to use their abilities in the future.

Sounds pretty fascinating. :)

And here we see the flip side of the story. :)

Damn D:

The group you're writing sounds as though they're acting on the notion of some kind of Greater Good Through Time Travel. Wonder what knock-on effects this will have. :O

This seems like a bit of a Timecop-derivation, but I imagine you'll have your own twists and turns for us readers. *keeps reading* :)

So far this is an excellent story. The characters are very believable, the story is very original, but also not cheesy. Aside from some grammer and spelling errors I'd say this is perfect. I hope you update soon.

Wow this a great start! You've got a good idea here and I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. I think I spotted a few typos but other than that this is brillant! Look forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!

Interesting story - not a new concept, but I love all stories to do with time travel and the changing of history. Got a bit of tense confusion happening, you switch between present and past quite a bit.
Keep up the good work!
Cheers

Never saw that coming. Suarez is one messed up dude. Very good chapter hoppe there is more soon. Keep up the good work

sorry i havent reviewed in a while. Lovin the whole FUBAR time travel thing. Well you gotta fell sorry for Gabe and his new pet. See ya.

ACK! Tense issues! One of my biggest pet peeves.

Aside from that, another awesome chapter. Hope to see more

havent read all of it yet but looks good
check out my story if you need any ideas

I love the story, the idea is great.

However, the grammar irks me.

Punctuation goes inside the quotation marks, not outside.

In the story, the soldier says "No... Major"!

The correct form is "No... Major!"

I see this happening with almost all the dialogue.