Heh, I like it very much!

And you DI find a title, a good one at that ;) Nice, very nice.

Bittersweet ending...painful memories...-and no escaping?

damn, and I who thought that when you die there are no more worries left...(except for certain angels that can be rather difficult... or maybe some shinigami has to lead you to the court-like thingy)

Maybe this isn't the death I was thinking of...There is death of body,of soul,of will to live ,of hope (so encredibly sad that one)and of so much more...

And I wsan't supposed to start talking like this, after all, it IS this poem whe (or I) wer talking about.

To be clear:It's sad in some waybut beautifully writtenand I like it!

Saluté, Lhune

Great work, I applaud you. I heart the first line! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^