Reviews for Sweep up the mess that is my life

it-tina 2007-07-21 ch 2, anon.	abusems u know who u r... finish the story pls
the.self.accussed. 2006-08-03 ch 1,	abusewow, this is so attention grabbing, i love it and i'm dying for you to add another chapter.
incandescente 2006-08-03 ch 1,	abusethis seemed interesting. i liked it that it was slightly unconventional, with andre being gay and all. however, i was wondering where's the kid? as well, you described heather as a painfully skinny girl. how would a guy be interested in such? please elaborate on that, if you can. perhaps its her charm or something. (: i liked the hook at the end. "luke was practically a god to them." so, they ignored her? left her alone? etc. continue writing! (: